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Good song! You have some pretty neat synths going on here, and the song has a nice calm feel to it. However, I feel as though the song lasts a bit too long, and it seems to simply repeat previous sections after 1:36 until 2:40 .
Here's what you could do:
Take the part at 3:04 , move it to 1:36 and extend it, possibly putting the spotlight on a low synth, guitar, or something after a while. Then after that, cut straight to 2:40 and make a new ending to the song.
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Republished
Deleted awkward silence at the end.
Added subbas
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Republished
Deleted awkward silence at the end.
Adde subbas
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this is good! would be neato to add some sub
