Now that I listen.. bassless works. It works because not all hip hop should be limited to the confines of bass. Nothing wrong with a little treble every now and then. Real man speaks blasts bass AND treble. .. optional mid
needs bass....maybe change the chords down at some point, you could just use a speed at 3/4 ratio on the very last measure of 8 if you know what i mean....other than that i love it, awesome work :)