Cover of track Time and Space and Stuff by Caleb Nathan
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Time and Space and Stuff

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this really needs critiquing. any help is greatly appreciated. thanks frens.

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    obelus

    First comment in two years

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    archangel [快]

    Those synths

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    archangel [快]

    Ooooooh

    Wow

    Ear Candy man

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    Caleb Nathan

    I’m gonna un-hide this. This was the first step towards shit like SEVENTY5 and Aquatic Remix

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    Rodrigo Del Canto

    1:05 WoW!!!

    Beautiful composition!

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    Xtract

    I really like the mellow parts of this song. They feel a lot more unique than the loud eighth notes "drop" if that is an applicable term.

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    JARx

    HOLY SHIT 1:05 WAS SO FUCKING SEXY!!!!!

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    chadlinje

    DOSE BLIPS THO!

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    Caleb Nathan

    Dope

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    Caleb Nathan

    Hope this takes over as my most popular track bc I fucking hate my top track

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      Noir

      Oh hold on, one of my other track overtook Warm Greeting? Awesome!

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      Noir

      (I meant Warm Greeting, not Lime lol)

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      Noir

      Don't we all?

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    Noir

    Right off the bat, the sub is *not* too strong, so points there. You have nice chords and a good melody to complement them, with that delayed resolution at the end to keep us on our toes. I like that. I also really like that you weren't afraid to let this get quiet. As for critique, the percussion doesn't feel like it fits with the rest of the sounds. Especially at 0.52 , where it suddenly disrupts the flow we had until that point.

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      Noir

      By choosing percussion rhythms that play around a little more, or by changing up the rhythms in your synths, you can bring in a little interplay to help those sections stand out more.

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      Noir

      This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but consider that the half-tempo beat you use is often open like that to highlight a part of a song that has a different characteristic, to let that show through. You alter the timbre of your synths where the percussion is strongest, but the harmonic qualities, rhythmic qualities, and melodic qualities are fairly similar to what we hear in the other sections.

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      Noir

      This also falls into the same problem that a lot of songs fall into here, where the looping chord progression doesn't get anything to break it up at all, so by the end it's starting to feel a little worn out. Having a section with different chords and a different melody would help break that up. Also, consider that when your chords are straight ahead eighths, there isn't much chance for rhythmic variation.

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    Caleb Nathan

    Love you guys<3

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    Caleb Nathan

    im feeling better about this track with that last edit.

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    Sunder

    Ah nice you pubbed it, do you want me to hide this?

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      Caleb Nathan

      if you want, you did help with the mixing. if you do choose to hide it i will credit you in the desc.

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    Caleb Nathan

    Fuck I found another mistake.