This reminds me of a song from an ooooold movie at the beginning and I'm trying to remember what song it is xD
Nice man! Not sure if theres a kick there or if its too quiet but I can hear that sidechain. Try adding a bit more percussion just to spice it up :)
And yes, that kick is super quiet, I had kick up the sidechain for the chords and everything, but eh.
See, I was really bored and out of ideas when making this, so I really don't know if I'd finish or not. If I happen to want to finish this, I'll take consideration to what you're offering.
If I was to finish though: Drums need work, better EQ-ing, Better Mastering, Extended time, and idk what more.
Idk. I was REALLy bored and REALLY out of ideas, so I didn't care for good mixing and tbh, I'm out of ideas completely.