too much wobble and bass,kind of mixed up,but,keep trying. i know you can do it,get good samples and mash them together and create a beautiful song,and try to add some effects so then it can make a great echo or noise.one sample would be for you,VDUB and type it to get a whole buch of samples,then make it t 150 or 175bpm,then maybe add some drums or snares or white noises and your song will be perfect.GOOD LUCK!!!