i guess you're getting somewhere... you need to learn some music theory or something though... and putting 'good' as one of the tags is a bit arrogant imo but keep improving I guess.
One of your best so far! Kinda long intro but i liked some of the flows you had goin on in it throught out. Also i wana remix but the button doesnt work...? :(
You need a lesson on moving and making sure you're frequencies are right... And that intro is way to Long. I got bored. After that the rest of the song is OK but still boring. With a lead synth like that, I'd expect something exciting.