The plucky chords were sort of inspired by AU5's remix of Superhuman by Juventa.

Critique would be nice, or some suggestions for things to add. I feel like there's something missing but I can't figure out what it is.

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  • It happens to me that as the plucks do not completely define the chord (more than one chord could match in the plucks) and something similar happens with the melody it feels a little unstable harmony. Maybe a soft background pad (marking the chord) could improve everything. Of course this is subjective and it is only an opinion raised with sincere humility.

    I love it ;-)

  • how does this not have more views. really polished and mellow track it's perfect for study

    • Thanks, I appreciate the compliment :)

  • love your work, critique hmm i really have to search for a point, but...in my opinion there is some weight missing, it is very airy and could need some kind of a grounding bass....

    • Thank you! That's something I can work with. I'll try adding a bass in and see how it sounds.

  • very pretty <3

  • Love it!!! That intro, man. :)

  • Nice man. Love the percs allot. Maybe u could add some toms at some points to make a bit fuller on the rhythmic part