Only advice i can give is to keep making music. You're obviously musically talented, I would just say that the sound design isn't perfect and the only advice i can give is to keep making stuff till you get the sounds you want.
My advice would be to listen to complex drum beats of different genres, and incoporate more diverse rhythms into your music. WHen you have a really good groove, fast or slow, you will most likely produce a nice melody to go along with it. On audiotool there is alot of trance and DnB and techno and electronic music, but audiotool can go far beyond that. My advice is to not get sucked into what is common, but develop your own! I am now learning this, and realized its harder to imitate than to innovate. :)
very different, guys like you have ideas..but on audiotool one has to learn how to display their idea with these crazy yet unlimited pulvs.....its a long road...very nice Hunter..i really did this enjoy this.