It's not my style to enjoy, but hopefully you enjoyed yourself making it. Keep learning and remember to listen to a lot of music here to get a sense of what you can do with things (gain a better ear for the music).
Listening to the track: Beginning seemed decent just needed to be tightened up a bit with the sounds, but I guess that's a limitation of sample work. The transition at
1.05
mark was difficult to take. I think it's because the balancing of the sounds is so harsh. But I will say after listening all the way through, I could begin to tolerate the pattern. There's no real structure to the track other than a couple transitions and could use a lot of balancing.
Ok a bit late at the party. Just let me clear this up. I have no problem with the song or music he makes (well I do but that's not the issue) It's his attitude, The use of language. At first I tried to explain it friendly. Then he responded with more foul language. Suffice to say it's like waving a red flag in front of a bull, a pack of bulls.
But we are fed up with this kind of attitude. I don't care if you are 12-years old you should know better. & yes he was the example. There's many more like him on AT. I know <sighs>
I am not saying your songs suck. I just have different standards for good. Personally,unless the loops/samples are just perfectly arranged, I usually dont like it much. Im much more picky with samples than synths xD Maybe to someone elde thisis hoodhood.
In fairness to you, this isn't terrible. It just sounds like you've taken loads of loops and played them on top of each other.. I don't mind use of loops, I just think you should experiment with slicing loops and the effects you can play on them to change the way they sound and get something new and original out of them..open up some tracks of other users and see how they made them etc. use the help vids and check out @infyusion tutorials.