i like how you continued using the vocals throughout the begining. i also like the way you built up to the main beat and then kept it slow and electronic rather than going overkill techno... prefer this one to the original
a question:how long did it take to slow down the tune?
Comment: maybe if you didnt use the vocals where it started getting really slow like and calm the song would sound better...
Overall:GRT SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. love the way you harmonized the chords in this