ehehe u are too kind.... i was totally unispired.... it's just a test and honestly i take midi file of Duran Duran-Rio bassline....and then changed pitch and one note ;)
just to add some some more spice to the chat... Near Field plain speakers are always the best choice, because they give the same sound you are creating. Headphones tend to give more stereo image than it really has, and low frecuencies tend to cover the whole spectrum since you have them right in your ears bumping all over. If you can't use those speakers (i can't) sennheiser s300 is the minimun standard if you want to get a decent perspective of your mix...
My headphones: AKG K44 (some say their are a litlle too bright). It sounds a little too bright, and the wave form shows that there's room enough for more compression. It is defenitely too bright. The high sounds are ok, but maybe you could consider lower the volume for the bass to appear... (less is more...)