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  PROJECT PLAYHOUSE 2013-01-15

  thanks man :)

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  Santos 2013-01-14

  nice work, goods synths

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  PROJECT PLAYHOUSE 2013-01-06

  @Noir thanks for all the criticism i apreciate it i forgot to mension that the track is unfinished and you have a really good point, i will adjust some more things in the song and thanks @ollie

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  ollie 2013-01-06

  I like this man :)

  At the beginning one of the notes seems very off. But otherwise the melodies are calm. Although BPM doesnt define genres. This is 140, yes. But is far from dubstep.

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  Noir 2013-01-05

  Sorry, I just wrote a book. But you did ask for feedback XD.

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  Noir 2013-01-05

  I actually like that bass at 3.13 , which is ironic because it's hardly bassy at all. It sounds like you used the same preset there as before. Make sure that you understand that this is the range that bass was designed for, and it sounds weird if it's too high or too low. I'm still favoriting this because you obviously put a lot into this track. Keep at it.

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  Noir 2013-01-05

  The wobble on the synths that come in on 1.22 causes them to make this odd pulse with the tuning of the arpeggiation. It's kind of unsettling and not really in touch with what comes before it. By the time the bass comes in at 1.35 , I've noticed that you're using a lot of the same lines for your different synths. The track would benefit from having this not be the case.

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  Noir 2013-01-05

  The percussive bassy sounds that come in at 0.13 could have their note envelope shortened by just a few hundredths of a second, so that they are a little more percuussive. The bells that come in at 0.27 should be looked over. Their lines end on notes that are not represented in the underlying chords, and thus sound unfinished. The wobble is a little heavy on the bass used at 0.54 .

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  Noir 2013-01-05

  The sounds at the beginning are nice. I'm a little confused by your chord progression choice: at the beginning, it seems like I, iii, ii, IM7 (or it may be the iii again), but later on, it sounds different. It's not exactly clear whether you're conscious of the chords you are using in this track. As for the sound development, later on, the sound start to get kind of robotic.

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  PROJECT PLAYHOUSE 2013-01-05

  thanks @RDz & @notoz means alot :)

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  RDz 2013-01-05

  Really good stuff. Yeah feels more like liquid dubstep.

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  notoz 2013-01-05

  <3! Love it Great Sounds! Chilled. Its Liquid Dubstep. Lol

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  tornsage 2013-01-05

  very nice sound - good one bro :)

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  PROJECT PLAYHOUSE 2013-01-05

  thanks man :)

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  PROJECT PLAYHOUSE 2013-01-05

  thannks all you guys for the positive feedback :)