Dusting off another old draft, reminds me of something but I can't remember......

Not too sure about the bass and the second break so lots and lots of tips and crit please :)

Ed:

Some tweaks, let me know if I'm going in the right direction :)

Adendum: This track is dedicated to those fighting against bigotry in any form - keep going, one day they'll either realise they're wrong or die out. Either way we'll win in the end :)

Create an account or to write a comment.

  • Whoa that jumped up! big thanks guys! :)

  • oh yeh

  • Republished

    Some tweaks, let me know if I'm going in the right direction :)

  • Cheers everyone :) @roobs Na mate don't be daft, I'd value your opinion.

  • :)

  • Love it jbeam!!! ;) Very cool!! i'm seriously not good enough to give advice or crit ,your work always sounds spot on to me pal ;)

  • actually i dont want to insult him, he may have a vat of Carbonite prepared for me :)

  • im not sure he could get through the door...

  • Im not sure cameron would be up for that, but Boris, well...

  • And cheers Tott :) Yeah a trancey/goa trend would be great! Yeah the second break does need more oompf.....anyway really got to go! back on in a few hours, take it easy guys! :)

  • Cheers mate three of my favourites right there :) Hehe yeah it was one of those "shit I'm going to get robbed or worse, oh hold on they're being nice" moments.....er yeah anyway....breaks over, back to work. Gotta love Friday nights behind the bar!

  • its OK mate!

  • Those claps are a bit misplaced in some place. Maybe tone the whole thing down for more of a climax in the last part.

  • It is indeed very leftfield...with a huge hint of chemical brothers.

  • I had to google bigotry! I feel a trance/goa wave coming on AT!