Thanks so much for the criticism :) I think I won't edit in a breakdown right now, but I think I'l make a better transition before the original melody. I will think about a breakdown next time.
Oh and another piece of criticism. I wish there was some kind of a breakdown. I know there is one short, but yeah, something a little longer. It's like full on electro for over 5 minutes. I'd love some kind of a longer bridge or something :p Well I guess that can't be changed unless you wanna make an over 7 minute song :p
Woah dude! This is your best one yet! Love the drums! They're hitting hard! However I don't feel like that kinda sad melody in the start fits after the bass kicks in at
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