Maybe it's just because I'm an amateur music-ologist, but I think the drawn out drumbeat ending is a little... meh, I guess. Otherwise, I think this is great!
Took Coeur's advice and changed the meleody up. Also extended delay feedback on the pluck by about 2% :P Oh, I also edited the picture - the reflection looked a little odd so I redid it.
*searches for something to fix in this track* 5 HOURS LATER I think you should try putting in more of your own melodies or something (although I do love what you did at
3:00
) because in a way it sounds like a "remake" not a "remix". There is plenty in here that was changed, but I still think it sounds kind of similar...