hey Melonade, mind doing me a favor and checking out mine as well? my second one turned out a lot better than the first. and just saying right now, i'm going to start experimenting with the synth and drum boards on my next one.
Second, try to stay on the same general subject within the song, (don't worry, i did the SAME THING when i was new; you get better at everything over time.)
Third, eventually, try to develop your own unique synth/style so people can tell it's your music when they hear it.
And last of all, i'll favorite and follow, to kinda kickstart you. You don't have to follow me, i'm just doing you a little favor, and you won't owe me anything.
Not bad. Okay. First. Using that many samples is not a very good idea, since some violate copyright laws, but don't worry, you didn't know, just try to use less next time. Learning how to make synths, Yoybasses, and drum beats will come naturally with a little practice and watching http://www.audiotool.com/tutorials.<<Link to tutorials.