I think this just needs some fine tweaking and a bit more elaboration. Give it an intro, verse and chorus and you have everything you need for a full song.
The pryda snare should cut off at the end of the measure. Try to adjust its end time on the drum machiniste. There's a few off notes like at
0:15
and I think these are one shots that can have their pitch adjusted by a few semitones (100 cents go into a semitone)
Keep cracking away at this, you can turn it into a edm club banger :)