I agree with clouds, everything but the bass is good; I might add some more hat progressions, maybe slightly tune in and out the percs for a "natural" feel
this is really nice man, love the chords! Crit wise, i'd say add more percussion, and make the current drum sequences a bit more 'interesting', the percs are crying out for a different kinda rhythm
That's tight! Would love to get them hi hats rolling at some point, adding some hi hat fills can really make your percs stand out without overloading the track