Neocterix is right, this kinda is failed, no offense. First, too much compression. Second, barely any white noise to go with the saw chords. Third, I hear no bassline (there's a difference between sub bass and bassline). Fourth (this may be just my opinion), too slow. Raise the BPM. But I like the idea of having a drop-ish at
1:01
and then the actual drop at
1:20
. Nice try man! :)