not bad for a first track. the actual written melodies are cool, but it need a better sound selection so it doesn't sound so basic. otherwise, this is pretty nice; good work!
i used two samples for the inital reverse chime and the riser. everything else came from the 3 hiesenberg[?] occiliaters and the beat tool(i forgot it's name). so do i need to work on adjusting the settings on the hiesenbergs?