again turn bass down and highs and mids, swap out your samples for some better ones, turn down those toms, --> DO NOT LAYER THE DRUMS UNLESS IT SOUNDS GOOD AND STILL RYTHMIC <--, add some reverb, crusher, delay, and maybe a curve on the windy synth you have, add some reverse crashes and regular crashes, remove the violin, i think it would be a good track length at the 1:57 mark as well
