i think this is nice. what it lacks in polish is it makes up for in character and neat musical ideas.
to work on the overall quality of the sound try to make more interesting and dynamic timbres for your instruments. everything has a sort of 'static' sound. each time the bass and chords hit they make a sound then stay totally still for the duration of the chord. this can make it feel a little bit lifeless after a while.
i wouldn't bother trying to implement this idea in this particular track. try making a new track and totally make it your focus to make dynamic, moving sounds. and see if you can develop some sort of interaction between these sounds too.