mommies home made cake
Inspiration comes from everywhere, but some things hold a more powerful influence over me. This song took endless amounts of inspiration from Baasik and Black Gryph0n's "Another End". The original song is about the endless possiblities you can have if you spend it with the right people and how whatever of the many paths you choose is the right one if you do it together. This one is almost a precursor to that notion, being about having to either earn the right to walk those paths or to fight your way to them, through good and bad times, and never leaving your dreams behind for a second.
Lyrics:
When I first found the light,
It was too bright to see
The gates locked, I was left outside
Out on my own, no one but me
Now the game has changed
I'm taking up the lead
I'm looking forward, not breaking stride
My body's calm, my mind is at ease
To my right, my only hope
On my left, my last shattered dream
I'm told to leave it behind me
Though it's not as dead as it seems
Storming the front, you can't give up ground
Burning put is a fatal flaw
I've worked too hard to give up now
I've played the game, now I make the law
Losing my mind from trials ahead
Given gifts envied and feared
The apex is light-years away
The writing on the wall has become clear
I've seen them before
What they want is in their sight
It doesn't matter who you are
'Cause in the end you'll have to fight
I've come this far not breaking down
But now I realize
To ignore the past is a mistake
I'll take it and I'll learn to rise
The ones without the will
They get left behind
The choice isn't yours to make
It's just the way it was designed
Cut the lifelines connected to you
Jump off the top and let it begin
In danger lies the safe way out
The secrets to your life lie within
What you see often tells you lies
The memories burn like paper skies
I won't be stopped by a low remark
The fire behind is from my own spark
We've come this far not breaking down
But now you realize
To ignore out past is a mistake
Take it along-
(Full lyrics on Youtube) :/
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@ダイバー What kind of cake?
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I like cake
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@Xplin Yes and no. I re-did the vocals in the beginning, which are absolute trash. At 2:36 , my friend Dylan takes over for the rest of the track. This is his youtube channel (link is only visible to registered users)
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cool... is that you singing?
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Yes those are in fact the lyrics to the track taken from the description. VVVV
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I won't be stopped by a low remark
The fire behind is from my own spark
We've come this far not breaking down
But now you realize
To ignore out past is a mistake
Take it along-
(Full lyrics on Youtube) :/
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My god i still love this
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I find it impossible for me to make a synth like that from the intro.
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Love both version!
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Beautiful!
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Hi, i listened to Rise, and fiddled a bit with an attempt of a remix.
I felt that everything in the whole track was "too high up", tried to ground it slightly with a base beat, little saxophone chord, and full out on mid register. (if you are not satisified with my remix attempt I can delete it, if you want me to)
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Republished
I adjusted the vocals in the first verse, did I make it any better or nah?
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I'm gonna fix the first verse of the vocals, because that seems to be the part that puts people off the most, and see how that goes. Give me a few hours at the most.
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i think you did amazing!
