Cool bro :) awesome starter track ;) Keep me updated on your stuff :) you can spam me... I can't wait to see what else you come up with :) Really great First track!
Woah. I've seen people that've been for months and aren't as good as this. Try lowering the volume a bit on the ocean sounds though, it gets a little overpowering. And for the panning I wouldn't suggest panning 100 % to either side. Try something between 20-40. Try to make your ending nice and smooth too, not so abrupt like how it is now. Lastly, get a profile picture! Without one most people are going to think you're either inactive or just a fake account. For a first track, this isn't bad at all. :)