I am tired and a little sleepy so I have no idea what I just made, but I think you guys might like it. tell me your thoughts and what I might need to fix.

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  • 🎵and i Wonder , if you know, what it means, to find your dreams come true 🎵

  • really groovy

  • clean

  • guitar is off tune by a bit though it is hard to tell by how much

    • I know what your talking about, and that I cant change that is the background guitar for the main one sample. I cant get rid of it. I wish I could, but that background guitar was made to be a bit off tune to add a certain aesthetic to the main guitar.

    • the actual guitar Its just off by a bit

    • on which part and are talking about the actual guitar and how it sounds or it's timing.

  • I do like this song but I think the main instrument should be just a tad louder because the bass is just overpowering it or maybe its my headphones

  • those kicks are clean, and I was really hoping you'd build off of the first melody from the first 15 seconds and again at 1:45 and at 2:08 bc I really liked the soulful sound of it

    reason I say that because I think it clashes with the more techno melody you also have with it

    overall nice track though

    • yeah like make it flow better as far as the vibe of the melodies, or make the transitions smoother!

      the overall track and the notes are good and the melodies are good too

    • and make the soulful melody longer.

    • so you want me to build a transition to it as it switches from soulful to Techno

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  • Republished

    I think I fixed where it didn't sound right. Tell me if I did it right

  • why would u put two sample melodies with two different keys ?

    • But I cant*

    • I know put I find out wear and its driving me crazy, but I'm to tired to even look for it and find it.

    • true

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  • need more work, especially on key, but you v got potential with this track.

  • dude i love that melody so much. tis amazing

  • Idk what to say Abt this

    • no problem.

    • I guess that fits my opinion, yeah XD

      (thanks)

    • it's everywhere, and crazy, but it fits together in a weird way that baffles even me.

  • Holy muther of skibidi this is good

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