Coming from your post in the AT server. Your track is definitely well put together. Arrangement, story telling, music theory, transitions. And sound design even. A bit on the sound design though, it could use a lot more richness. Something ray volpe and a few others do is that they layer different tonalities for the "single" main bass you hear in their tracks. Learning to beef up sound design is hard. I wish you luck on that, because it's not an easy thing to do.
I remember you used to really struggle with sound design alongside everything else. I'm seeing a difference in your music, a night and day difference. You're making it, steadily
I appreciate the feedback, thanks for listening! I will admit it's been a long time trying to figure this stuff out. Lots more research needs to be done for my future plans