you need that bass to come through better. turn up the lows on it, it sounds really cool. wubs could have a bit more presence, less reverb i think. i like it with the phaser on, sounds fine. i LOVE the vocal...wow....this is extremely cool! other than better mastering over all id say this is fine. awesome work! :)
wow! dude i love these highpassed drums and the pluck synth. noise sweep could be a bit better. less reverb probably. at
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the mix gets really muddy, its the saw lead there. turn that down and maybe cut off some lows and cut off highs from other things. you could try to emulate a multiband compressor but that might be a bit too complicated haha.