Beauti
last/?
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warmth and comfort,
one night insomniac...
a leap into an abyss
of colours and happiness
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Look what I have found!
not a speck of darkness.
hours of trial and error
are finally ripe to harvest
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a sky full of stars,
I swim in an ocean
full of fish and corals
a relief from all caution.
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so I drift away,
far from the shore
to never find borders...
anywhere, anymore.
IDK people, please leave some criticism on this. Got something quite big coming soon. c:
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I'm going to change a few little things, add another synth and this is going to be album-ready. It's not going to be perfect, but to be honest, that's not what I want anymore anyways.
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i lke it!!!
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my apologies for not listening to this beautiful song sooner
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This is alluring.
Don't get yourself down, don't doubt yourself... we could all make improvements.. What matters is that you feel for your music and that you don't stop working and experimenting for the sounds that you want to achieve. It's certainly been a struggle to get to the point where I'm happy with what I make. Trust me, there's always gonna be a few tracks that you're completely in love with.. but you just can't develop them any further. It's irritating I know, but it happens :)
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I wish this could go somewhere else, but it's not Good enough :(
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Now this is beautiful
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the poem makes me smile :)
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inspired by musical genius @aeiter
