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  cabrainvocado 2011-05-27

  perfect!!!

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  ntjon 2011-05-04

  I agree with the comments ... Go ahead

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  Tyburn 2011-04-23

  Agree with the others. Fantastic intro though.

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  arche3.0 2011-04-23

  nice. many possible directions you could go with it.

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  cripta 2011-04-21

  nice...improvement...mmm a bass ?

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  Asclepeion 2011-04-21

  the piano make it so intense olaf this is brillant i like it that way .....for one other version add electric guitar in the background ... but the original is alrdy amazing :)

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  Hbeao 2011-04-21

  Sounding good :) I agree with yafeelma, you should vary the melody, just once or twice, to help add more colour to the peice :), I don't really know much, but that's what I think :)

  Can't wait for the final track :D

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  yafee? 2011-04-21

  its nice! perhaps some bass melody/riff thruout, or other melody overlay to give it a bit more depth of sound. its good 'as is' tho! :)