i forgot to respond earlier but here are my critiques:
the intro seems too long or its missing some better build up
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0:46
the drums seem to come in all the sudden likes its missing some other buildup stuff idk
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1:06
when it gets quiet there should be something that transitions to the drop like a voice or a little riff that plays on a new instrument idk just something
durring the drop i feel like there needs to be a some synth playing some notes cuz it seems kinda empty to me
okay so the intro needs some drums in it either to add energy or to fill up empty space cuz it feels a little empty
for that fakeout, u could do what VB does and automate a lowpass and high pass after the first part.
for the drop, its cool but it seems to be too similar in its entirety. maybe some background chord things like strings or smn just to add a chord might be good... but it needs something