Find a track you can reference and try to find a similar mix to that. First and foremost, it should be the same genre as the music that you are producing. Secondly, consider what key your reference track is, especially for the sub bass frequencies which have a different sort of overall sound. And finally, make sure your reference track is at the right volume, the audiotool plugins should help with that.
I know that there are not many people on this website, who would take the time to leave a thread of comments on your track. But I really appreciate your music bro, it means a lot. And I think you're going places. You just need that extra push. <3 Keep working on it, I believe in you.