as a beginner id encourage you to watch all the audiotool tutorials that would apply to you, or as much as possible cuz the only proper way you can make a good original beat is through your own and not through loops if you have to click remix on one of some of the establsihed audiotool artists songs to learn or go on youtube like i did when i started
but on this track id say the kicks are a lil too much for me, kind of feels messy, but i do see as a positive that you understand whats possible on AT, so youve got potential :)