I can see where you were going with this. It's a great concept! Thiugh I have a few suggestions that you may want to consider. :)
Instead of using ToneMatrixes, you can use Heisenbergs (or Pulversinators I believe they're called, can't check atm) depending in what kind of instrument you're going for)
I also suggest messing with quasar, base frequency and BPM!
I would say that the choice of instruments can seem a bit weid, I also suggesting adapting your instruments to go hand-in-hand!
Your completly right i made this in an hour at 1am so i knew it wasnt gonna be good if i feel like updating this ill take your suggestions into account.