its cool rhymes tho, but if u wanna write sumn, write sumn that occurred in ur life, not like these rappers nowadays. They say things but they dont do it. Write sumn thats applicable for u and others, sumn that people can gravitate on. Cuz the very words u use can affect others whether its in a good or bad way. Just like all these kids hearing all these rappers, its bad enough that their music is wut made kids go and gang bang, y kids skip school, do drugs cuz they see others doing it