Thank u and thank u for the advice i rlly care about my work i want people to love my work im kinda a newbe im trying to learn az much as i can. Thank u again. :)
I like how you scrambled the form up. One thing that could help you out is if you studied (idk if you care that much :P) how harmonies work. That could help you develop your skill a whole lot more :) but overall, pretty good!