Feedback - Would like the new noise at
00:08
to be synced in with the strings coming in or come in gradually. Displeasing textures blending in at
00:42
. Starting the transition from
02:18
, I'd prefer the bass to appear at
02:29
instead of
02:53
. Your just adding more high notes after the transition when previously there was a ton of high end at
02:18
- I'm looking for some deep contrast in the transition. For the drop at
03:27
, ear candy is great but I'd really prefer if there way more low end-
For the transition at
02:18
, there isn't enough contrast for me too but I don't see how I can fix it since it was part of my very first ideas of the composition. Maybe the drop before is too intensive or the silence between the two parts too short, I'll see.
Thank you so much man ! Always impressed by your ear training. Yes the noise at
00:08
was not wanted, strangely I wasn't hearing it with my headphones but only with my speakers, so I thought it was a speaker issue. Thanks for confirming me that it's coming from my audio, I'll try to fix this. The other advices are precious too !
like in the first half with the deep bass going on. The atmo is amazing and the melody is complex, along with well-mastered drums and I really see 0 constructive crit for those elements.
You are simply a genius, I like the atmosphere of the track and how it develops but keeps the initial theme. The whole track gives me that Lorn or Hans Zimmer emotion :)
Minor changes : added a cinematic roll, some chill "cricket-like" downfilters, delay after the impacts in the first part, and changed a little bit the cello melody