Sounds okay! The beat is a bit basic, I would recommend trying to incorporate something for the listeners to really notice the beat itself and make the song interesting! Not too much to take away from the vocals though! The end sounds unfinished or something too. I think the vocals are nice, but maybe a little bit less auto tune? It works with the song even with all the auto tune, so just depends on preference I guess? When breathing you should probably try backing away from the microphone!