i dig this!! the chord progression is interesting and i think the structure is pretty engaging
i will say tho that the volume goes crazy at around 2:30 and 3:00 , it's noticeably louder than the rest of the track and its a bit of a jumpscare
also your sound design could use some improvement. i feel like the sections that you wanted to sound huge (for instance 1:00 or 3:00 & onward) are bogged down by too basic sounds. i'd look into how to make supersaws or something
