Yeah I feel the same way @HeAd_HuNtEr does. You can do a lot with this tune; I'd add some type of soothing string instrument to even the track out. But this is a great start actually. Keep it up!
oh great more spam too GREAT your not really even a part of the community you come on the the site and SPAM its kinda annoying you have 60 followers (mainly because of spam) and i have 26 and i have spammed no tracks and been a part of the community un follow delete every comment of criticism but learn from this before you delete this
honest opinon, based on my experience: It's way too empty. Theres a lot that needs to be added. It's a okay track but you need more punch in it! Also calm that synth down alittle. But keep tryin'!