the build-up to the drop has some nice energy to it, but the 3 minutes before it sort of take away from the effect.
Darren was always the outcast of the zoo. The other ostriches didn't like his swagger and how he always talked about riding free with the wind. But Darren, the proud ostrich he is, stood, gazing as the sun descended into the horizon. He knew he would ride away, he would chase the sun as if it were his dreams and would not abandon his goals. Darren stood amongst the traffic, breathing, pondering if he should do it. The community never accepted him, would anyone else? Darren put on his helmet, grabbed his keys and twisted the ignition. The motor hummed and whirred, as Darren abandoned his past, facing the future head on, with a smile on his face. And with the foot on the pedal, Darren sped away...
A WIP so far but if you want to collab on it, just ask idc. Please crit, i'm not sure if there's too much kicks in the drop or not.
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hey there are some really nice synths/chords/sounds in here
the weird melody thing is cool too
the thing is... all the build. there's a lot of it, and it's not really structured in a way that builds tension or energy,
and your drop is sort of empty too
so if you can arrange it in a way that has a really great impact, it would sound veery nice. (:
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Go to all samples and type in Motorcycle 44.
You're welcome.
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You should try to find a squawk sample or something and put it in there right before the kicks come in.
And maybe some motorcycle vroom vrooms.
