I always appreciate when people remix my tracks and actually do, and not just "steal them", so thank you!!
My crit is this:
I do enjoy the new style, I can see where you're going with it and it's pretty nice!! The only constructive crit i have for it is the flow and mixing (these go hand-in-hand) could use a touch up.
What I mean mostly is fixing up the transitions (i.e. where the cymbals crash, new synths come in, etc.) so it flows a lot smoother.
I do like this--good job!