Cover of track Offshore: Three Hours Of Pleasant Dreaming by Hbeao
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Offshore: Three Hours Of Pleasant Dreaming

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Hope you enjoy. Just took out a snare build-up.

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    Santos

    great, great! the piano is so good

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    andremoda

    nice, very nice !

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    JewlMoose

    yer welcome.haha!

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    Hbeao

    @JewlMoose Dude, that is spot on! The track is all about the few hours of sleep you get until evil takes hold of your mind, and whatever has been troubling you is implanted in your head and you can't sleep. Then you have to just stare out the window until all bad things go away, then you can rest again :) Thanks!

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    JewlMoose

    i think everything matched well.....when i listen to music i make a music video in my head......This dude went to sleep..his dream was peaceful and calm..but turned into a nightmare....he fought his way out of the nightmare,woke up,stared out the window for like..2 minutes....and then sat back down....END...haha...i like it

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    ABADDON

    still so cool

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    sbronz

    Great track man!

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    Hbeao

    Thanks for the comments guys :D Yeah you are right about the snare, it does seem out of place :/ How else could I build-up at 2:00 ? @tophat , glad you like it so much ;)

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    EliaTrix

    Espectacular.

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    tophat

    oh im sorry i just realized exist also agreed with Olaf i dont want to make it seem like redundant critism lol, on my 6th listen now! haha its helping me get through this crazy pre-calculus homework xD

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    tophat

    listening to this and doing my homework....BEAUTIFUL piano..love it. absolutely love it. it inspires me! And i also agree with Olaf, for how this song started and the way it is originally percieved, i think a melodic transition vs. a percussive transitiion would work better, to me it would sound both more professional for an EP and fit the mood better....i love this though! im on my 3rd listen now!

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    Frigolito

    Good! Very relaxing!

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    ABADDON

    good track, butt olaf.s right the snare doesent fit the track that well beside that a good track

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    Olaf

    Beautiful piano, great atmosphere too. Only I'm not sure if the "trancey" transitions with the stuttering snare etc are really fitting or necessary. Maybe some other type of transition maybe? Just a suggestion, I think the track is great (:

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    PsykACID

    Wow... great atmosphere for the intro man! Great space and quality too! The beat is OK, but if I have something to criticize about your track, is that, I think, you have to put some "explosion" factor man, like a change of beat, or something that explodes (like drum craches). I mean, you have a great intro, but you dont have the great explosion that the intro makes us prepared for. We stay all the track waiting for something great to happend, and it just dont. Besides that, it is a great track, keep going on man. Give a comment about my track too, I would love to hear about my stuff too. Boooom