nah you sorta have the svdden death style on the switchup of drop 1, but the intro synth and layering synths just arent agressive enough, like noisy distorted synths. with the drums (snare mostly) try slightly different velocities during the metallish bits to better emulate an actual kit snare
truthfully I made the description when the draft was in its early stages and I didn't really have anything to change it to. As for the drums, there's a few awkward transitions throughout the track that I need to fix so I'll keep that in mind next time I open this up.