This reminds of the movie bionicle . It sounds mechanical to me
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Nice. I like the rhythm and the synth choice, but frankly I struggle to have an opinion about it. Not really a fan of how it's moving harmonically - it sounds a bit linear to me in that regard. But there are a lot of cool things going on sound-design wise and where the harmony is linear, the colours change a lot. Always something new to hear. Good job.
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what's your favorite quark flavor? I'm partial to raspberry.
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wild
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Very nice !
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i'm tangled in spain without the a
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Hi mate ! Sorry for the late feedback :( I love the soundscape, as always the composition, the overall progression and the diversity of sounds and melodies are so cool ! I especially love the minimalist synth melody at the beginning :) I also love the dnb style part !
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In the first dnb part, I think you could enhance the kick, or add a mastered kick behind the dnb drum sample just as the second part, but with more high-ends, maybe only during the second half (like from 01:43 to 02:24 ), and add a little bit of sidechain compression on the melody. I'm sure this can lead to more dynamism, unless this isn't your wish !
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the only critique i really have is that the melodic elements sound very full and stereoized while the drums sound compressed (mainly the dnb parts). i prefer the stereoized sound personally so i would try to make the drums match that feeling in the mix (i know how hard it is to manipulate sounds here lol) but another fix would be to route everything to a mixer and adjust/compress everything there so it all sounds more uniform.
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Thank you so much for your feedback! It's super detailed and really helpful for figuring out what could be improved. For this track, I don’t feel like making changes because it’s for ATDay, and once it’s submitted to the "contest," I don’t think it’s fair to keep tweaking or improving it, lol. But I’ll definitely try to make the sound more balanced in future projects. Thanks again, and I’ll definitely hit you up for your opinion in the future, my friend!
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its generally tough to get people to listen to a full 5-minute track these days but the level of energy kept rising throughout the track and i think thats a factor in keeping people around for the whole thing. kudos
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as far as musicality its a very interesting piece, its definitely not a boring track. lots of melodic elements, which i love. im a sucker for a good soundscape as long as its engaging (thats why im not a fan of ambient for the most part lol) the mix overall is clean, again my only complaint is that its not exactly uniform. that could be a good or bad thing depending on who you ask, but it doesnt sound *bad* if that makes sense. everything works together well, the arrangement is cohesive
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A good collection of sound with just a hint of twang too it
excellent work
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Really great i like it 👌
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you're always so consistent even when trying out new things. great work!
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Nice, goods synth and mélody, i like it
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i feel as though I am floating in the clouds.
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awsoooooome
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This track is exeptional, love the rythms and the great flow the litle melody's and sounddesign, deserves to do very well:~)
