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needs a reverse cymbal or a riser to introduce the song.
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would be good with a rasslebock plugged into the audiotrack tag by using the stop/pause effect.
Hi-hats are a little repetitive and you could maybe pitch bend them to make it interesting. And also I would make them a tad louder.
the Kick is overpowering so I would decrease the low-end a little bit because when it feels like the 808 doesn't have enough breathing room for some reason.