it's fine having tracks where drums are basically all low end, but this is basically every track of yours... i love having gritty drums, but that really isn't fitting for lo fi... either speed up the tempo or make things just a bit cleaner
if theres one thing i despise in life, it's clean snares and hats, trust me bro I try adding punch but I end up relapsing and taking all the high eq out, thats just me lmao