At like :50 sounds a little flat, but I have no room to judge cuz I do the same thing haha! This is amazing though man, I'm honestly a huge fan of yours weather you knew or not! xD haha and this is honestly amazing! Melody is solid, and everything else about this incredible!
I think one thing you could try in the future is some sort of synth that counteracts the sidechain - like some sort of growl idk could add more diversity between the first and second part. This is some expert level stuff right here tho so idk if I should be talking or not xD