“Whilst exploring in the forest, she runs upon a cute, little slime. She thought to herself that it couldn’t be that hard to defeat, right? Ironically, it called for backup and well… I’ll leave it up to you to imagine what happened next… ;D”
I'm not too familiar with this kind of music but I think the overall sound is not very balanced. So I would take a look at what is clipping and try to fix it to the best of your abilities. For example, I don't hear the percussion pushing through, which probably is a synth issue, you'll need to take a look at the synthesizers in my opinion and adjust it as needed. Other than that I don't have any other feedback, this is a really nice song.