yo this was p good
feedback ( honest and brutal )
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I know it's not the best, but it's the best for me, ive spent 3 days perfecting it watching youtube tutorials!
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yea yea
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main inspiration of this is tenjo
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Republished
whole lotta reverb
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I kid you not this is horrible all of my beats are horrible
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Wtf since when did this have so many listens lol
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Still good
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Ngl the 808s clash bad, but the mel is cool, but maybe find a soft backing pad to keep and atmosphere going.
You are getting better though ngl.
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i saw your comment on naswalt's wall and ofc you arent a nine year old, how could a nine year old make something this good, but I will say there's a lot of empty space, but the start is good and it is quite melodic
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meh I’ll try to fix it up
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how did bro describe how i feel listening to one millionth gear perfectly lol
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Empty space, that’s not good. A good song fills your ears, this feels like a solo potato chip for my ears while most other songs feel like a big plate of carbonara, nice, filling, yummy
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Really good tbh better than me
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the space needs to be more processed it's very raw and dry
the clvr 808 is clashing u need to cut the tail end using the excl on machinsite or volume automation
also add pads in the back
get rid of the arasaka loop it does not fit imo
the arranging is questionable i wouldnt just take out the melody randomly
overall not bad at all
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i’m in dis bih w clayco
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work on the mix
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Nice
