Thanks for entering :D I will agree with the fact that this may need some work. I think your transitions in the beginning were a little abrupt, I recommend either transitioning with white noise or keeping the piano and building upon it with more instruments. The piano and guitar you used at
0:37
is actually supposed to be right before the drop and raises in volume which is why it clips so badly there; not meant to be looped. also you need some side chain on the drop pads. It's a good start though :)